Loved your film overall :) NIce placement of music and very well written dialogues. NIce colors too!!!! It brought that drop of tear that reminds me to see the same happenin around me!!! As i said: NO SHOW JUDGES CREATIVITY OR TALENT.. its just the lack of some in their pockets that they fill it with yours :) :) AWesome work brother.... Keep it going.. would love to talk to you more, mail me ur id at harii_us@yahoo.com
Being a critique, i think a few more closeup would have helped with the final money, the son cryin and a bit on the auto mans exp..