This is definitely a good article. I have a couple of suggestion's which could have made your article more attractive
1 Subject - Most of your concerns are directed towards the Indian Govt Employee's. You cannot draw your opinion against a nation by limiting your experience to a few citizen's.
Low-level Govt Recruits are usually the college dropouts or the low graders in school. With the benefit's of Reservation where else can the low-graders manage to get a job? Which MNC would recruit people based on Reservation's? Value's come with Education. You are trying to represent India, considering wrong pool. How many Top-Notch graduate's prefer Govt Job?
"10 Things I hate about Indian Govt Emp's System" could have been a better Subject for the Article.
2 Point No. 6 " Frustration at Home " is not acceptable. No Indian for that matter nobody would be frustrated at homeland. Can I say that Frustrated at France you decided to settle in India?
Apart from these two concern's your article is brilliant. The Govt officials would need to give a serious thought against your concerns. I appreciate your efforts in bringing these points to light. Great Job !!
