Hi, This is parag , I read five point someone.According to me something is lagging in tht story.Its a good carricature at the start , but that is the big drawback.Coz it cajoled us to think bout fictional lineup of the story.But it is presented in such a way tht it seems real , but as far as I concerned its impossible.I do like the story coz it leads to catharsis for a loosers like me and cajoled me to lead a life like hari.Its an undeniable charisma which enable winner attitude in loosers.But i m sure it can be ameliorated and will create a craze among the youngsters.Its jst need a touch tht create a trust among the readers. Well i m waitin for a better version of five point someone
