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please learn to write lead/ intro properly
by grir reeg on Jul 12, 2008 10:06 AM

The opening paragraph is written needlessly cumbersome. Separate sentences are joined with 'and' in three places. At least the writers and editors should refer to class five grammar books before coming up with such crap.

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