1> "Subject : Life's too cruel to Rahul" - Dont agree. Life cant be any better when you are a son of a famous politician, you dont have to do any hard work, everything in life comes just too easily....
2> "....at a time when the Mahajan's are still mourning over Sr Mahajans demise" - Dont agree. Did you intend to write "rest of the Mahajans"???? Coz i dont think rahul was mourning his father's death for you dont mourn for someone's death by Partying!!!!
3> ".... because his parents could not take due care of him....." - You cant say this .. not atleast for his Mom. I believe his mother was a good house wife and a responsible women who didn't have to anthing abt politics....