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good article..but..!!!
by Rahul G on Aug 11, 2006 11:38 AM

Hi Rishi,

good article.. u did manage to capture the right emotion...i believe each one of us pass through the same grind each day travelling through the 'locals'..

but..i almost grimaced at one sentence in your article towards the end...'the limo driver'..i dunno whether you mentioned it intentionally or just out of habit..
Hoping you do not take any offence from my comments.

Happy writing.

Cheers,

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