Sure a good history of events to justify your article... you are right in the sense that visa denial was wrong action... but tell me this are you not touching the larger issues through this... and if you are, then perhaps you are supporting someone for wrong reasons... and let me also add what has not been done in the past does not imply that same mistakes should be repeated in present and future, and also that your defense is lackign self esteem... do not say if Rajiv etc were never denied visas ... target the real issues... what if they were denied... your arguements would just look incomplete...
