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Regarding your article - ''How a Sikh gent got Butt out!''
by Bibek Singh on Apr 18, 2005 11:08 AM

Hello Ms. Sheela,
The article -"How a Sikh gent got Butt out!", is good.
However, the intent of explicitly mentioning that a "Sikh" got out Salman Butt is not clear to me.
(What properties of the Sikh religion were used to make the batsman out? Don't others visit rest-room in their lives?)

If it was only to make the subject line a bit "catchy", then I would like to humbly request you to discover better ways of doing the same. It will certainly add more value to your writing style and will help you in growing at a better pace.

I am sure you will take care of this aspect of Journalism in future.

Wishing you "All the Best"!

regards,
Bibek Singh
<bibeksingh@rediffmail.com>


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